All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 21'

ITS GETTING REALLY GOOD. BUT I HONESTLY DIDNT RATE THIS CHAPTER AS HIGH AS THE OTHERS. FOR SOME REASON THE OTHERS WERE MORE INTRIGUING

once again, you have continued your masterpiece. i think if you were able to get in contact with a publisher they would do it in a heartbeat. perhaps daniellekitten can help you with that. a few of her works on here have been published, so she had to take them off. at any rate, in regards to the previous comment, not every chapter is going to have you jumping up and down on the edge of your seat, some serve to be informative, yet the storyline in itself receives the best vote, everytime.

Dragon_13

Honestly I will be sad when this story Ends but at the same time, when a new story comes along im positive it will be just as great. This story is awesome and I have thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter.

Did you really have to end it when it was just getting good?!?!?! I can't wait for you to come out with the next chapter...so hurry...please???

Maybe at last they will figure out exactly what Jenna is up to and put a stop to this funny business! Great update as always, secretme. It's like a Day-After-Christmas present.

I absolutely love this story line. Each chapter usually ends in a shriek of panic/frustration when i realize i have to sit on my hands patiently and wait for the next update. Please keep writing, and while you should obviously take your time and not feel rushed to submit something, that being said, PLEASE DEAR GOD GIVE US THE NEXT ONE SOON!!!! :)

I love this series, but the part about Aislinn holding her breath, hoping that Cullen would not be angry enough to kill her, sort of jarred me.

Natural enough that Cullen would be annoyed at the interruption, and natural enough that he would make wild threats, but surely by now Aislinn is confident of her importance to him? And not be actually scared?

fabulous story so far of course Nora is upstairs:P this story is so wonderful it should be published I hope you keep writing more chapters..can't wait for more..

I loved this chapter. OMG this story is getting better and better. Im dying in suspence here :)

I cant wait for the next chapters.

Better several well written chapters than a few hurried ones. I love this story and will continue reading as long as it takes to finish. Thank you for writing and posting so quickly. It's such a treat to have something new to read nearly every day.

Who cares how many chapters it takes, Ill keep reading. Love it. I love the characters and story. Is Aislinn preggos? I hope so

the suspense is killing me!

please do not delay in finishing this story.

but do not rush things and cut it short either.

thankyou for an excellent story!

This story is awesome beleive me. we need babies soon. and jenna delt with.

I am luvin' the story development here! Write more without dragging it out ;P The story is just as integral as the smut... it just makes it sweeter when it happens.

And THANK YOU for continuing to write and submit through the holidays! It's given me extra holiday cheer :)

Keep em coming! They're so good!

thats all, completely smitten

LOL,

This is an extreemly well written piece of fiction. You really need to get the whole thing to a publisher and get it published once it is done. I'd gladly buy a copy. Your sense of timing either SUCKS or is extreemly exceptional. I humbly await the next installment.

-Jack

No need to rush to the finish. But I'm just greedy and loving the story and characters. You have me checking for updates daily.

Another great chapter as always. Please don't feel like you have to rush it; its a fabulous story and I am in no rush for you to finish. Please, please, update soon; the suspense is killing me :)

love it, great characters, plots, timing, setting, everything. you're doing an awesome job with this. the suspense gets to me every time i read the last chapter posted...hope your next update comes soon!

KEEP UP GOOD WORK I LOVE IT SO HOT AND SEXY

There are few stories that keep this ADD woman's mind occupied enough to read every single word! Thank you!

Don't finish keep it going. LOL I haven't found a better written story in a long while. Not event the ones published are comparing to the awesome story line you have going. Keep up the good work!!

But at this point I personally feel that it's starting to get long-winded - the story could have been wrapped up with Rafe's downfall and a new storyline involving Jenna's treachery could have been picked up at a later point, perhaps as a sequel involving new characters.

When you write with such a clear voice and weave such an interesting story, then I relish the ongoing story. In fact, I would be so disappointed if it was already over. I've been spell-bound all afternoon and evening.

OMG!!! You can really tell a story to keep your audience listening. Congrats on that. My husband wants me to tell you to hurry it along because he is feeling neglected right now. Sorry for him. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please consider writing a paranormal novel about lycans. The onces that I have read haven't been as interesting as this one. LUV IT!!!!!

THis story is so good. I hope keep writing. Thank you.

There is never the need to rush an ending, when the writing is this good

I found this author by accident, but what a lucky break. I will tell you that female authors ROCK in the nonhuman world. Your characters are so real that I find myself looking at my dog with new eyes. I am enthralled with your story!!!!!! ;>).

Brilliant! LOL

I love your style and storyline. One of the best.

OMG Cadifar is going to kill Jenna, I hope but loving this story and boy is it getting intriguing and I agree with Keith, Trennick should be put in the dungeon!!

I absolutely love this story. I stayed up until 2:30am last night reading and reading. I finally had to submit and go to sleep.

I'm currently reading again.

I had delicious dreams thanks to the characters and story line.

You are doing an amazing job!!

I vote every chance I can.

the suspense is building lol cant wait to move on to the next chapter, but I have to go to work lol this sucks. im going to be thinking about this Nora all day.

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it is a refreshing read

thanks

It wouldn’t let me vote ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

All of these assurances that its almost over, and I dont want it to be over!