All Comments on 'Leana - Back in the Game'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I... I... I... think

She... she...she... um, uh, um, uh, stammers a LOT. Understood the effect you were going for the first time; by the twentieth time, it was just really annoying to keep reading that in an otherwise hot, well-written story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow!

You are so great and you should have made a 5th. Page continuing with weither or not she had a kid... and from then on .

Campus77Campus777 months ago

A fun story. For once I agree with Anonymous. First a 5th Chapter and second the repeated stammers. I just started to skip over them. Other than that I enjoyed the seduction of Lena.

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