All Comments on 'Learn to Hate Ch. 01'

or one searching for release. TK U MLJ LV NV

Please people, do not expect anything from this story--it was neither planned, nor plotted. It was a test story given I was not sure as to how to write this. Even I know this is poor writing.

Or submit, rather. Pending then Awaiting Approval decided to play hot potato and I was unsure as to how to submit it.

from your comments if this is a single story or only part 1 as the title indicates. I think for your first submission it's good. The only thing to make it better would be at least a 2nd chapter. So.....

Congrats on your first of hopefully many submissions!

Bad @ all. Yes it reads a lil like a rough draft vs final copy, but the main points are solid. I hope you write a 2nd ch (or more), would love to see how this plays out.