All Comments on 'Leaving... Ch. 02'

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Nightowl22Nightowl22almost 19 years ago
Good start

Didn't we just take a step backward...maybe two???

She's already on the plane and now we're back in England getting the ticket.

Career women have a tough time, hey? They want to jon the world of working men and to marry they need to find a man who wants to join the world of the housewife.

Or rich!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Yawn!

That about sums it up...two writers that still can’t write a decent story even between the pair of them.

Papabear49Papabear49almost 19 years ago
Hmmm! Still Good

FIrst off, don't let the weasel Mr. Anon bother you, cowards always strike from the dark. If he or she can't say something up front and accept their own consequences then they need to crawl back under the rock thay came from. Nuff Said.

Now Ok it's a major flashback where are we going from here? I hope the problems with Frankie don't scar her.

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