by Scorpio44
Story and an interesting way of telling it. Love the 2 ways telling the same story. Hope to see plenty more. The Houseboat was nice a sweet and made that version really nice. This version with the Dungeon was plain exciting. Love both versions.
Scorpio44 I think you have a great story here you might want someone to check some of your spelling its not bad but it needs a little corrections to the spelling.