All Comments on 'Leaving the Navy (bdsm) Ch. 04'

by Scorpio44

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Billydee2Billydee2over 16 years ago
Really Good

Story and an interesting way of telling it. Love the 2 ways telling the same story. Hope to see plenty more. The Houseboat was nice a sweet and made that version really nice. This version with the Dungeon was plain exciting. Love both versions.

bornagainbornagainover 16 years ago
The Best around

Scorpio44 I think you have a great story here you might want someone to check some of your spelling its not bad but it needs a little corrections to the spelling.

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