All Comments on 'Lesbian Neighbors'

it was ok....kind of all over the place, needs a grammar check but it was good

An interesting plot I liked some of the ideas.

However, I found the paragraphs to long. As such they were difficult to read and follow. I would suggest that you at lease use a spell checker and a grammer checker to make your sentences flow.

Having similar problems as you, that ismy first suggestion.

But thank you for your efforts.

Miranda