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"She's really a lot of fun. I think we're going to be friends. Don't worry. We both decided that we're going to take it slow about the four of us getting together. It's better that James sees you as little as possible for a while.

"You don't have to worry, Neil. You cheated on me and got away with it. You got to enjoy Inga, and it won't cost you a thing. You won't have to learn your lesson, and you won't have to move out -- unless you are looking for an excuse to move out anyway. Are you?"

Neil was enjoying listening to her and smiling, but he noticed her voice had turned dark with her final words. He was still on trial. He had to think fast.

"You are the best lawyer in town, Eleanor," he said, ignoring her question. "Thank you for winning my case. I guess you're right. I won't have to learn my lesson."

"I guess not," she said, frowning.

"I'd like to tell everyone what a great lawyer I have. I could tell our friends Saturday night when we celebrate my birthday. I already told them I bought myself an expensive birthday present and not even you know what it is. They're curious. The story of me and Inga would really curl their toes. But I have the feeling you want us to keep this victory to ourselves."

"You're right."

The answer was almost automatic. From the expression on her face, he could tell she wasn't in a happy place and hadn't listened to him. He stopped talking.

"I'm sorry," she finally said. "What did you say?"

"I said I bought myself an expensive birthday present and I was going to announce it at the party Saturday night."

"That will be great," she said sarcastically. "They'll be delighted that you're still Peter Pan, who won't grow up. Buying yourself an expensive gift shows you're as childish as ever."

He laughed as he stood up.

"Where are you going?"

"Please stay where you are. I've decided to show you what I bought tonight rather than Saturday. I'll be right back."

"What's that?" she asked when he came back to the kitchen with something in his hand. Then he got down on one knee, and she began crying.

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AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

What a waste!!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

He'd send Inga to jail, divorce her while she was there and then learn the lesson that woman are bat-shit-crazy. Awful story telling.

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanabout 1 year ago

Inga is a rapist who should be in jail, James is her procurer/weapon Eleanor is at the very least an enabler and Neil is just a coward so well written but not one redeeming factor in the story I could find

OlFrog14xOlFrog14xover 1 year ago

This reminded me about "edrider73".

Hopefully, I will remember longer this time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Beyond stupid. Can we give stories negative numbers?

ibuguseribuguseralmost 2 years ago

Odd one. But an originally odd one.

SunnyU2SunnyU2about 2 years ago

It was kinda odd, but I liked it a lot. Could read another story about these characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Garbage

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

edrider73's universe is always a bit twisted in ways that are viscerally painful. I hope that does not mirror the experience of actually being edrider73. That would be a sad state of affairs.

Hornydevil47Hornydevil47over 2 years ago

I like your weird sense of humour. Thank you for your effort. Sad that so many people can't read your stories with a less serious mind. Will continue to work my way through more of them.

trandall9991trandall9991over 3 years ago

I can't read this authors stories. She's a man hating witch with a b. I read revenge in advance...enough for me. Saddletramp1956 rode his sequels to fame here on lit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Is this kind of absurdity entertaining?

I see nothing of value here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Not The Best

Inga uses James .. I would Have Told Inga I have a Girl i Love .. Let Her Play Her Games Somewhere else ..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Let's recap, shall we? James uses his size and physicality to bully and intimidate people into doing whatever he desires. This despicable behavior is rightly judged by Inga to be totally unacceptable. Therefore, Inga uses James' size and physicality to bully and intimidate Neil into doing whatever she wants, regardless of his express desires. What she wants to is use Neil as a tool to force James into acting the way she wants. Then, Eleanor uses the threat of James' size and physicality (on loan from her new BFF Inga) to bully and intimidate Neil into acting the way she wants. So I'm guessing the lesson is that using bulling and intimidation to manipulate people is totally unacceptable behavior by men and an admirable trait when used by women? Ed, I'm truly hopeful that I don't live in your town.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Epic stupidity

The lesson he learned was that Eleanor was fucking crazy! No man in his right mind would ask her to marry him. Where did THAT piece of logic come from? I mean really Ed. Did you stop for a minute to think this through? My guess is no. Stupid beyond all rhyme or reason.

1 star

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Good story

Jeez edrider73, a story I can appreciate. No men got anally raped over and over. It was a well written and interesting story with appropriate humor. Good work.

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