All Comments on 'Lessons For Katie 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
punctuation

using the ampersand (&) instead of 'and' is lazy and makes for a harder read. It spoils a reasonable story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
&&&

&&& so distracting i gave up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
* * * *

I'm feeling generous today! (Of course, I am ignoring all the ampersands.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
&s

All you who are complaining about all the ampersands, computers nowadays have these new things call text editors. you can use it to change them to 'and's

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
re: &s

I hope you realize that applies -- even more so -- TO THE WRITER!

Thisandthat72Thisandthat72about 10 years agoAuthor
Re: &

Sorry if the &'s are distracting everyone. This is my first submission & didn't realise.

It is however commonly used in Australia. Sorry.

Will try to use 'and' in future.

Thisandthat72Thisandthat72about 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Quickly Over it...;

The girl this story is based on does in fact have E size breasts.

Perhaps cup measurements differ country to country.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Next Chapter

Hurry up and write the next chapter in this series where she fucks her step dad

Thisandthat72Thisandthat72about 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Next Chapter

Chapter 2 is already out Anonymous. Chapter 3 should be uploaded within the next week.

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