All Comments on 'Lessons in Amateur Photography'

...that clover was lucky for him since he ended up finding it in his butt crack or the fact that he found it at all!

This was quite well written, and very amusing. I found the dialogue during sex hilarious, I don't know if you meant it that way.. if you didn't, please keep an eye on repetitious statements such as ... Tammy moaned, and then, moaned Tammy a paragraph later, etc.

While a little bit formulaic, your writing shows potential.