All Comments on 'Lessons with Mom Ch. 01'

Hurry up and finish this before we lose interest...

Fucking teasers!

It is just barely a beginning. It has possibilities but this was too little.

your an a** either give us readers the story or don't. This was all/only intro - no story here.

I agree it was too short to really qualify as a true chapter, but the writer did warn this wasn't a complete story. It's not bembamember's fault you can't read.

Shows promise. I think your detractors are being a little hard on you. Sounds like she wants to fuck him and I think you have the skill to bring it off. Hubby isn't satisfying her. So she wants her son to. The motivation is there. So go to it.

The thing about a story with a "to be continued...", it never is. It's a tool that authors use when they're too darn lazy to finish a story, and are impatient to get feedback with what they've written so far. Shame really. Oh well, this comment isn't quite finished, 'to be continued...'

Another LAZY author who uses apostrophe's instead of quotation marks for dialog. Pure laziness.

Are you going to finish the story?

Then saved myself the time and moving on, to the next story.

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wow one chapter from 2013- it was a great start-