All Comments on 'Let Me Help You, Good Doctor Ch. 04'

by Myanlass

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Damn...more please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

That was good, well worth the wait and makes me more impatient for the nex tchapter

mekakymekakyalmost 14 years ago

Damn, that was hot! Can't wait for more!

cpm09cpm09almost 14 years ago
Bloddy Hell!¬

That was hot! please if you can, do be too long to post next one/

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
THAT WAS HOT!!!!

I really liked the heat and depth of your story. As a matter of fact I gave it 5 stars because of content . . . but you really need an editor for the grammatical errors. At any rate, don't let that stop you. Write some more because I need a fix. . .lol

pmpktypmpktyalmost 14 years ago
damn

I was so glad you updated the story and damn it was good

trinisamplertrinisampleralmost 14 years ago
yesss!!!

that story was definitely worth the wait!!.......can't wait to see where this 'relationship' is going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hot

I'm glad Dom's brother talked some sense into her. What the hell you doing going after another woman's man, girl?! I like the way Nik opens up to Dom, and I hope she opens up to him even more. Can't wait to see how you continue and conclude their journey. Will Gianni be an addition to this series? Who will you pair him up with if you are including him? Any ideas? Argh!! So excited! Can't wait! Thank you for sharing! =) Alex.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago
very good

I love that you had them hold off to sleep together. I love how his family is ....I didn't even read the first two chapt...I will def. go back. Hope you continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wonderful - Next chapter please!

They're both hooked!!!! Love the fact that they waited before they slept together - adds an extra dimension of tension to their already great chemistry!

Thank you; and l'm sure I speak for all your readers, who don't mean to be greedy, but please post the next chapter soon???!!!! Can't wait!!!! xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Mya

welcome back, and what a return, u are an exciting writer, don't know whats in store for nick and dominique, but i def wanna be around to find out.

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 14 years ago
holy hell

wow wow wow, i can't wait for the next ch of this story, im so loving it

catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
great

why do i think nik is going to rile her family, i just have a feeling, and hope gianni and jades sister meet up to make some waves

IndianChocolateIndianChocolatealmost 14 years ago
WHEW ( fanning myself over here)!!!!!!

THAT WAS JUST SOOOOO DAMNED GOOD MYA

JessieJames31JessieJames31almost 14 years ago
oh my!

D-D-Damn!that was beyond hot..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Finally

I love this chapter... Can't wait to see the next intallment. You are very talented senorita, loved your stories. Just don't leave us hangin... (^_^)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
if only there was

a deep sigh on here, hehe, i like this, i know it is gunna get heavier for the 2 lovers but who cares lol, right now it's good, and btw it is so good to hv a more than decent story back on here, boy i miss all u very cool writers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
WOW!!!

Don't make us wait too long!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Next Chapter Please!

A great story with great charcters! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

x

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Umm

Love your stories just wondering if you have an editor? There are some minor spelling and punctuation mistakes that are annoying. Like I'm a bit confused is Rafael a boy or a girl? Because sometimes you write the name as Rafaela and in Italian names ending in a are usually always for girls.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

And now she's hooked

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
mmm

That let u no the sex what that good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I have to say it, you have the most appalling grammar I have seen on this site. It's almost to the point of being painful to read.

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