by Myanlass
That was good, well worth the wait and makes me more impatient for the nex tchapter
That was hot! please if you can, do be too long to post next one/
I really liked the heat and depth of your story. As a matter of fact I gave it 5 stars because of content . . . but you really need an editor for the grammatical errors. At any rate, don't let that stop you. Write some more because I need a fix. . .lol
that story was definitely worth the wait!!.......can't wait to see where this 'relationship' is going!
I'm glad Dom's brother talked some sense into her. What the hell you doing going after another woman's man, girl?! I like the way Nik opens up to Dom, and I hope she opens up to him even more. Can't wait to see how you continue and conclude their journey. Will Gianni be an addition to this series? Who will you pair him up with if you are including him? Any ideas? Argh!! So excited! Can't wait! Thank you for sharing! =) Alex.
I love that you had them hold off to sleep together. I love how his family is ....I didn't even read the first two chapt...I will def. go back. Hope you continue the story
They're both hooked!!!! Love the fact that they waited before they slept together - adds an extra dimension of tension to their already great chemistry!
Thank you; and l'm sure I speak for all your readers, who don't mean to be greedy, but please post the next chapter soon???!!!! Can't wait!!!! xoxo
welcome back, and what a return, u are an exciting writer, don't know whats in store for nick and dominique, but i def wanna be around to find out.
wow wow wow, i can't wait for the next ch of this story, im so loving it
why do i think nik is going to rile her family, i just have a feeling, and hope gianni and jades sister meet up to make some waves
THAT WAS JUST SOOOOO DAMNED GOOD MYA
I love this chapter... Can't wait to see the next intallment. You are very talented senorita, loved your stories. Just don't leave us hangin... (^_^)
a deep sigh on here, hehe, i like this, i know it is gunna get heavier for the 2 lovers but who cares lol, right now it's good, and btw it is so good to hv a more than decent story back on here, boy i miss all u very cool writers
A great story with great charcters! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Love your stories just wondering if you have an editor? There are some minor spelling and punctuation mistakes that are annoying. Like I'm a bit confused is Rafael a boy or a girl? Because sometimes you write the name as Rafaela and in Italian names ending in a are usually always for girls.
I have to say it, you have the most appalling grammar I have seen on this site. It's almost to the point of being painful to read.