All Comments on 'Let's Do It Again!'

by oldfogey

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norton9norton9over 13 years ago
loved it!!!

thks for a well written, erotic tale of two couples finding themselves together; i do hope that you write more about the adventures of both couples

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lucy´s second?

I loved your story it gets to the heart of things not just some cuckold wanting to watch his wife taken while he only gets to watch, this is much different it brings out the feeling of the people in it. Lucy seems like a down to earth girl not some bimbo that will go with just anybody. She seems to do it not only for her pleasure but that of her husband also. It doesn´t seem as if she will be bringing anyone home to dominate her and her husband also. Only thing is so many name thrown in. At first I was thinking Charlie was her husband the way you were telling it. Then there an instance where you said Larry said to Larry. So it was kind of confusing trying to keep up with the names. But I still liked it very much. Hope to see more of your writing.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
More garbage

More cheap, scrappy, swinging, garbage from old groggy. Just a lot of nothing.

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