All Comments on 'Letter to My Husband'

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oOScarletWingsOooOScarletWingsOoover 18 years ago
Letters

Letters are so much harder to rate because one can't really comment on the essence of it because it may or may not be "true" and if they are "true" then negative comments tend to hurt the author.

That being said, I think the strength of this letter rests in paragraph #2 and #7. They seem more candid and erotic. They drove home the "Tell me."

Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I received a love spell from dr.marnish@yahoo.com and within 3 days he casterd the spell

I received a love spell from dr.marnish@yahoo.com and within 3 days he casterd the spell, the spell started working straight away. before i could know what is happening my lover who broke my heart came to my house to ask me out for a lunch" we back together now and we are living happily – Shelee Victoria, Australia

XanacocXanacocover 2 years ago

As soft and as warm as a whisper; as strong as steel newly tempered in a furnace.

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