All Comments on 'Letting Go'

Break your paragraphs up. Hope to see more.

Please don't stop here,give us another chapter or two.

There is so much you can do to this head strong woman,

now that she has found a man to take control of her.

Let him really make her totally submit to him and to his sexual needs.......Rich

However, wrong category. It was certainly not a romance unless you continue on and make it so with a follow up.