All Comments on 'Letting Them Play Through'

What is with all these cuckold wimp boys that won't confront their cheating whores/slut wives? Why do writers have all these husbands with no backbone? And no balls.

I don't mind being left hanging. In my mind I can imagine that it didn't end there.

... a part two.

Shelly obviously enjoys here fucking around with the men from work. She uses sex to get the deal done. Does she do it for her husband? He seems to think so but he is just another man who is too weak to confront his wife because he wouldn't like the answers he received. He should head home and pack up and leave her cheating ass to the fat old men who get off on using a woman for their pleasure. Don't even bother talking to her because she will just give him some bull about "loving only him" and doing it "for him." She is doing it for her and the thrill it gives her. 4 years! What a waste of time with a cheating wife.

He didn't deserve the initial job he got. He got the job over someone else who was better qualifed because his wife decides to screw the boss. She exacted a Quid Pro Quo.

And after at least 10 years he is enjoying the benefits of what she did: A Porsche, an Audi, a country club membership, a big house in a good neighborhood, nice vacations and substantial college funds.<P>

Question: Is he doing the job well now? Has he proven himself? Has he earned the bonuses and the pay raises? Or is he the company joke? The story says he threw himself into the job. Has what he has done made a difference or does he still owe all his good fortune to his wife being the company whore for his boss and the big customers? Is he still only there because of the actions of his wife?<P>

So we have a classic story of a wife fucking her husband's boss and customers to further his career. How does she feel about that? No idea, the story doesn't actually say. Although it gives a hint: Shelly appears to have made the prostitution fun by adding in a golf pro. For variety? For golf lessons? Can't exactly be too distasteful. Did she ever recommend that he try for a job with a different company? And she has been doing it for over 10 years. <P>

The same 10 years that he has been faithful to her.<P>

So now he knows the truth. He owes his success to the fact that she is a prostitute. Talk about your world imploding. Also that for the last 3 years she has recklessly exposed him to any VDs his boss, their customers, or the various golf pros might have acquired. (Or don't you think people who fuck around get VDs?)<P>

Did she do it out of love? Maybe. Will they stay together? Maybe. Would he be able to live with her knowing she is going out to have sex with 3 men every week? And now she knows that he knows. She won't be able to hide it anymore. <P>

But one thing is very, very certain: The joy that he used to have in his life with her is gone. His sense of self worth that she so carefully fostered is gone. Whether they divorce or stay together the life he had at the start of day is shattered forever. Very sad.

ide take some pics then sue the hell out of the company....do a dna n see if all the kids are his if not sue them for that also....but make sure he gets enough to retire n then divorce the sorry assed bitch ...take the kids n move ...if it was me id saysomeplace with a beach n a nice house close to it...if his wife wants to see the kids she can come see them every other weekend n a month in summer ...lol as if theyed want to leave the beach in summer...anyway with an opportunity like this to retire with millions n get rid of a major cheating wufe also...plus the money now to indulge himself n have the money to fuck hundreds of women why not..id say the old boss made his money already n if the board members dont fire his ass its only because he owns the company...so id take a million tax free for every year id worked there ..hopefully the ex wife wouls then sue him for blackmailing her n get what is left ...hopefully the company will fold after this n hopefully some of the wives will find out what has been going on n a few more divorces will happen...with his customers n also within his company....id totally trash his business after i got my 4 or 5 million

the marriage as they both knew it is over. Maybe both of them can settle for what is left. Maybe he can, but she can't. Who knows?

for at least the live of 5 people ( 3 kids) are down the toilet. do think that this was worth writing it ? see any erotic aspect in this ?

his self worth has now gone as his wife is now the one wearing the pants in the family. Ego would dictate having to get evidence of trading sexual favours for reward and then going after them. Perhaps sabotaging a deal or to so that it explodes in the customers face?

Anyway despite the fact that its implied the wife loves him she would eventually lose respect for him as she has become lady mcbeth.

The payback should be the next chapter.

Please continue with the husband getting his payback.

and author, and apparently all nine commentators who seem to accept that the dollar is the bottom line in life, whether gained by revenge or prostitution. It certainly isn't love for hubby and family that she is expressing, nor is it love when hubby supports her in her chosen "profession".

A wife willing to do anything for her husband and a husband who found out the truth about his job. No real winners here. Although, if I were him, I would have punched the braggart in the mouth, followed up by a kick to the nuts for disrespecting my wife.

i wonder sometimes why people write some stories is it because they are such big losers they have to prove it or is it that just don't know any better, waiting on your answer loser or idiot.

....such as" my husband rocks1"-which make it seem like just another not well thought out story. Maybe a part two can rescue it but doubtful.

i;ll agree with the crowd. I usually think writers have the freedom to write as long or short as they want,but this one cries out for at least another chapter. the writer has made us - at least me- feel for the poor sap whose life has just been depthcharged. it could end here with his going back to a suddenly very sad and lonely life, but i don't think it would. the way it's written I don't see him able to live with it. And that brings us the very important question of how SHE will react to the end of her secrets and curiosity, as to why she did it.

More, please.

I enjoyed the story and the writing. When I read the comments i was not surprised that some of those who made them assumed they "knew" the motivations of the characters in the story and could accurately assess what hubby should have done... if he were really a man. They know why the wife does what she does and they seem to know what motivates her emotions, her actions. Well, I've looked and anonymous doesn't post stories here on Lit. So, personally, I don't give a lot of weight to Anon's comments and recommend you don't either.

For him to call out his wife for being the company slut it could cost him his wife and family along with his job.

I think a devious plan of revenge to get back at his boss along with his wife, and still come out on top.

That will be a tough job to complete, but it could be done. Revenge comes in all sorts of degrees, but the most felt would involve her children.

Thanks for the good story, and making my mind have a little fantasy.

I don't know whether you have any plans to write more. But I give you credit for a surprisingly intense story about a situation which, if described in a sentence or two, would inspire nothing more than "kick the bitch to the curb."

Clearly, as you tell the story, it's obvious that the wife has acted out of love for her husband, even if adding in the golf pro each Saturday is to give herself a little fun.

So, on the one hand, his sense of his wife's love and support for him have been strengthened; on the other hand, she's a cheating lying whore, and how can he live with that and maintain any self-respect?

A painful dilemma. And well-told.

Thanks, ohio

Anything more would ruin the image of them being in love and only wanting each other. The fact that she is a cum slut would ruin him.

....half the writers on this site started out as anonymous.Jeeeshhh!

An Interesting story. I have no idea what the writer was trying to convey though. Was this an example of a woman who loves her husband so much she will debase herself and, by extension him, in order for him to be successful? Or perhaps she is a woman so materialistic that she ensures her husbands success by cuckolding him, sure in the belief he will never find out? Or something else?

From a strictly writing standpoint, something I do know about, this story leaves too many holes. It is too much of a snippet of life for the reader to come away really satisfied. Scorpio44 mentioned that the commentators felt they knew more than the author did about the woman's motives. Well, Scorp44, in a good tale they are supposed to or else the writer failed in his/her task! And where that is lacking, the reader is free to attribute any motivation they want and take it from there.

With respect, every story needs a beginning, a middle, a climax, anti-climax, and an end. It also MUST HAVE a reason for the characters to act as they do. This story misses out on motivation and ending. I suggest the3 writer go back to the word processor and try again.

Regards,

C

it's doubtful, uncertain, undecided, questionable and suspicious what this author had in mind as an encore or Zugabe. PPP defending the anonymous? Unglaublich.

In writing 1/2 is the talent and 50% is the subject.<P>

Those who write about self inflicted male humiliation without consequence are sick excuses for what used to be a human of substance.<P>

That's you writer - words but no substance.

I guess that makes me an unglaubig! (My anon problem lessens with anons that make cogent or funny remarks, -carrying on arguments and attacks over time and multiple entries in re same is problematic, as is the issue of freedom through transparency.) Or I'm being a hypocrite. Or MAYBE, I'm trying to "pay forward to anons what HDK does to readers in general, understand their role in the whole passion play. Or again, just a lousy fuckin' hypocrite!!

Come on you guys , it's not like we haven't seen this scenario before. We all know there won't be another chapter and we all know it's about the fetish of humiliation. (hubby ignoring the bad and focusing on the good) .

Well written but nothing new and certenly not worthy of all this analysis.

Is that ok with you, fuckwit? Not a bad effort at writing creatively as the story seemed to be built around the punchline(the title). Those seconds of dawning realisation for the husband, wow. What's that like, fuckwit?

When I finished this story I was left up in the air. Reading the comments helped me define why. Chagrined succinctly points out the holes in the story that left me feeling that way. What was her motivation? Was she sacrificing herself? Or just having a good time? What will he do? Confront her? End his life has he knows it? Or pretend that he doesn’t know and not mention the Elephant in the Room? Will he stay with her for the sake of the kids but wind up hating her? Maybe he will thank her for her unselfish “sacrifice” of 10 years plus. Generally you like to have a story have a definitive ending. In this case you don’t know.<P>

Or do you? As the last Anon comment pointed out look at the title: “Letting Them Play Through.” I think this may be a case of “Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell.” Wonder how long that will work.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

No doubt the "reconciliation at any cost" idiots should be pleased with the predictable ending of the husband accepting this wimpy situation. Maybe the title should be; "Letting them play on" which would clarify where a high percentage of the RAAC stories end up [unfortunately]. So this must be one of those "fantastic examples a loving wife"? Yea, right - who needs enemies with a slut wife as such!

Thats never been done.

Can I say something here? Britease is right, as is Chagrined and DQSteel and a lot of the other authors comments. Those who read may or not understand they’re are coming from, this isn’t a complete piece, it begs for a conclusion. What the write has done is leave it in limbo for the reader to make his or her own ending, and reading it carefully you’ll see that there are a multitude of ending to choose from, depending on what your moral or fetish addled mind feels appropriate. What makes anyone think that Kurt has to put up with this revelation, it all depends in which direction the writer wants to take it, as those who have read any of mine will agree. JPB is probably the master of leaving a story frustratingly unfinished, and I have been able to turn his around, this one is child’s play considering the holes in it you can drive a Mach truck through without so much as smudging the paint job.

For a build up to a conclusion, this one ranks well on my satisfaction meter, suxs if it’s to be left to flap in the breeze.............. Ummm, Hey Mr Tease, how’s that red pencil goin? I fink I got another one, Mr Tease ya there..I fink he's hiding...lol

I am FOREVER amazed at the high-minded PURITANS who read this stuff! Good-GOD, people, these are fantasies...and TALES from an author's imagination. I think if we critique the stories from the perspective of grammar or construction, it should suffice. After all...if you are reading these stories, you've shown already where your interests lie! Give the author the benefit of "producing" his own work. If you like it, fine. If you don't, do it yourself, BITCH!

the wife is making a great sacrifice for the furtherance of his career.

Fuck that, Cuckold, Wimp.

There is no room for making your own ending. The ending was made quite clear when he handed her the phone and said "Well have fun." No self-respecting man would willing encourage his wife to engage in these kind of activities.

The ending is clear. Hubby realizes how he got the job. He keeps the job because he has gotten good at it. They get new jobs, or continue getting renewals because Sweetie is willing to satisfy two old farts and a then a young stud for dessert after 'eating her brussel sprouts!'. Does she love fucking the old farts? Almost certainly not. Does she think it helps keep the company afloat? Surely! Does she come back on other days to fuck the club pros? Almost certainly not ... it is just a way to end up with some good sex after fucking & sucking old farts.

So, at the end of this story, Hubby gets to face up to reality, and decides to not rock the gravy boat ... and probably not tell Sweetie that he knows!

Story not finished. Husband is an ultimate cuck, well don't know for sure because he could be planning something and just doesn't want her to know, but won't know because again the story isn't finished. I can't believe this story even has comments praising it especially by some well known authors on this site.

I can't tell if they're trolling or not. I guess it could make sense since at least 3 of them write mostly about cuckolding. This story was not good though and I really don't think it was meant to be taken seriously. Think it's meant for people who have cuckold or humiliation fetishes (Wife is the company whore). I mean the story isn't particularly good, it's not original (again company whore been done before and better), it's just a quick short story to read and jack off too if you like that kind of stuff.

What a spineless wimp!

My wife found your story and shared it with me; we enjoyed it. It was a snappy piece of flash fiction. The husband’s blinders came off, as he overheard the young golf pros talking about his wife’s slutty behavior. Then, his handing her the phone she had forgotten, was emotionally charged as he said, “Well have fun." I’m sure many of us husbands have done similar things, I know I have. He was sending her off to ride other men’s cocks and he knew it. Quite possible, she also knew that he knew.

It’s interesting for us husbands reading your story, to imagine how we would react in a similar situation. For example, my wife is a tennis player. So, I visualized her dressed in her very short, white, tennis skirt with matching white, spandex, thin top that stretches over her nice breasts. She knows her nipples are generally hard and visible when playing! She often plays doubles, and the other three are generally good-looking men.

My wife is beautiful, sexy, and poised. She also knows how to play men. She soon learned that her flirting at the club, with successful businessmen, sent more business my way. Then, she learned that her kissing them and letting them grope her ass and tits brought more business my way. Next, she learned a good blow job session brought a lot more business my way. She shared everything so, we were both enjoying this.

Finally, one night in bed, she whispered in my ear that a couple of very attractive guys wanted to fuck her. And they had guaranteed they would give my firm some huge contracts. She has a high sex drive and continued, “I’d love to spread her legs for them." I went to work on her g-spot, nibbled on her neck and whispered, “Up until know you have just been doing ‘some little favors’ for some of our friends and they reciprocate by giving ‘some favors’ to my company.” She groaned, “Yes, and I’m loving it.”

I rubbed her faster, saying, “But now you want to formalize it and officially be the company whore. You want to be a prostitute, right?” As she came, she groaned, “Yes, its not just that these guys are super sexy. I do want to be full-on prostitute and I want us all to know that! Prosti! Prosti! Prosti!”

I stuck my cock in her and snarled, “Yes, my little prostitute, you might as well give up your cunt, to help my business. Because if you don’t, you will just start giving it away for free. Why be a slut, when you can be a prosti?” She agreed, cuming again on my cock, “Yes, prosti, prosti, prosti! Thank you!”

It’s nice to have a wife with a golden cunt, who knows how to use it for her husband’s career success. Mine always insists that they have a blood test first; that way she can take them bareback. Many successful businessmen just love to dump their load inside ANOTHER MAN’S gorgeous, young wife. And my wife cums much harder on their cocks when she is barebacking them!

In addition to financial gain, I get the benefit of sloppy seconds, thirds, fourths, etc. She also cums violently on my mouth, as she is face sitting me, and feeding me their potent semen! As she cums, she shouts out, “I’m feeding you 100 million sperms, 200 million sperms, 300 million sperms, etc” depending on how many clients just dumped in her married cunt!

We would love a sequel to your story!

Company whore is right.