by Reddestiny921
I liked this story very much it is unique. I had hoped to find new chapters in your A demon or two and the Angel story but finding this one is also a great way to start my day! I look forward to more.
Oh while the story itself has a few common elements that other fantasy romance stories have, I love how you illustrated them with your words. How you portray this world is lovely and different! I felt a connection to the story right away. Looking forward to more and am very intrigued on what the parents are like hehe.
Your writing has definitely improved with this story! The story line is interesting too. This is a great start.
They are so sweet!! Fiona sounds like a good strong female character that will make this story much more interesting to read. And please don't turn Naithaniel into a jackass. He seems like a good strong but fair king from what we've read so far. Can't wait to read more!!
Just found your stories! they are awesome, would love to see more from you in the future!
Great writing!