All Comments on 'Lexie's New Business'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great start

This sounds like a great start to an excellent series.

louienohiolouienohioover 18 years ago
Wasted plot, read it before

Another rewrite of another old tale. Christmas at the country club, the wife must stoop as the husband's business fails. The author has writing skills, he simply needs fresh material. A suggestion? Don't try and write fantasy / fiction. Write about your own experiences, they will always have a facet that separates them from these worn out stories.

sherlock40sherlock40over 18 years ago
And the cheating wife begins her slide.

It looks as if her "business" will take off well. I am sure the extra service will continue to get more and more involved. Since her husband "can never know", how soon will her betrayal become commonplace?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
A clever story

I liked the story. Oh the possibilities.

gogreengogreenover 11 years ago
nice story

this was an entertaining read.

also differnt

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