All Comments on 'Liar Ch. 04'

Nice long chapter and update. Please don't wait so long to update this story.

you keep going back and forth between present and past ... sometimes it's hard to tell

with this tale is that it's not finished yet. Get to work. Seriously I am enjoying your story. I seldom read a story from a woman's POV but this one has me hooked. Great character development, fantastic plot, and for me a good flow. The flashbacks are a very nice technical aspect and make the story more interesting. I find little fault with your writing and if there are mistakes they are too minor to matter. Please hurry with the next chapter or chapters, I don't wait very well. Just ask my wife. Thanks for your hard work and keep it up.

This is definitely my kind of story line. Please PLEASE update soon.

Wahoo Please add more soon!

Great job but please don't make us wait too long for the next update! Only thing is ... Ethan. It's a bit presumptuous of me but I think he's Gabe's (at least I hope he is). In the next chapter could you maybe also clear up how Dean knew what happened 6yrs ago? and also maybe clear up whether or not Dean has seen his only sister in the past 6yrs, because I don't recall reading how long it had been since the two had seen each other.

<p>Anyway, great job nonetheless. Looking forward for more.</p>

I really loved your story and hope the next installment is coming soon. Only thoughts I have on improvements are to keep the sections longer rather than break them into smaller stories, and have a more clear line between past and present.

i feel sorry for her.gabe wants her,(but hates her having a sex life)but doesnt seem to mind fucking around.he does not deserve her.he"s a fooking prick.

Loved it! Nice twist with Ethan. Please write more soon!! Really don't wanna wait as long for part 5

I absolutely love it! I hope you update soon! I'm glad I found this on story search, cause this is bloody well my kind of thing. Love it! Hope you update as soon as possible.

Best I ever read on this site!! <3

No means no.

There is no time that it doesnt.