Liar Ch. 04

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"Nothing I haven't seen." Gabe said, eyes dark broadcasting his wicked thoughts. She knew that look all to well. That was the look of trouble.

"Knock it off and zip me up." Sloane snapped, not in the mood for his libido.

"Ask nicely." Gabe teased, grinning as he eyed her up.

"Please." Sloane said, her tone void of sincerity and rolling her eyes. She spun around and bared her back to Gabe. Suddenly anxious, she looked over her shoulder to see if he was moving towards her. Her heart skipped as her iridescent green eyes crashed into the blue steel ones belonging to the last man her heart should be skipping beats for.

Sloane watched as he approached her slowly, his eyes never leaving hers. The air seemed to crackle with electricity. Sloane felt dizzy. She lost her breath when Gabe touched her shoulder, struggled to keep her hiss of pleasure contained. She sucked in a breath and held her waist, as he started the slow treacherous task of zipping her up.

'Why is this taking so long?' Sloane screamed in her mind, trying to force her attention to on anything other than the heat consuming her body. She could feel his warm breath on her back, giving her chills as he made his way up. She could smell him, his scent that marked him and only him.

'Gabriel' Sloane's mind whispered to her seductively. As the back of her dress close, she felt him place a light kiss at the top of where the ends met.

"Anything else I can help you with?" Gabe whispered deep and seductively into her ear. He pressed up against her slightly, letting her feel his hardness on the small of her back. She closed her eyes, barely containing the need to spin around and jump him.

Sloane looked up at him over her shoulder, bringing his lips dangerously close to hers. Just as her lips was about to meet his, the sound of the door beeping alerted that someone was about to come in. Quickly moving away from him, she waited until she was a safe distance away before looked to see who interrupted them.

"Baby? Where are you?" The maid of honor called as she floated through the suite, "Oh there you are."

"Shit." Gabe said under his breath as Sloane realized what was going on, "Johnna..."

"You left me down there all by myself," Johnna said ignoring Gabe as she walked right up to him. She didn't seem to notice Sloane cowering in the corner as she immediately wrapped her arms around him and started kissing his neck, "That was very bad. You know how I get lonely..." Sloane wanted to throw up at the feigned helpless tactic.

"Johnna. Johnna..." Gabe said trying to get out of her embrace. Sloane didn't know whether she should clear her throat or try to slink out of the room.

"Oh I see you're already ready for me," Johnna said cupping Gabe's cock, causing Sloane gasp. The sound triggered Johnna's attention who looked curiously between Gabe and Sloane before responding, "Who the hell are you?"

"Nobody. I'm absolutely nobody." Sloane smiled, feeling like she wanted to cry. Six years and Gabe still hadn't changed, "Carry on." Sloane said as she walked out.

"Sloane...wait. Sloa-" Gabe called out to her as she shut the door.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Lost me when he raped her.

No means no.

There is no time that it doesnt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
5 stars!!!

Best I ever read on this site!! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love it!

I absolutely love it! I hope you update soon! I'm glad I found this on story search, cause this is bloody well my kind of thing. Love it! Hope you update as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Next installment??

Loved it! Nice twist with Ethan. Please write more soon!! Really don't wanna wait as long for part 5

erin1955erin1955over 14 years ago
good

i feel sorry for her.gabe wants her,(but hates her having a sex life)but doesnt seem to mind fucking around.he does not deserve her.he"s a fooking prick.

zorillozorilloover 14 years ago
Finally More

I really loved your story and hope the next installment is coming soon. Only thoughts I have on improvements are to keep the sections longer rather than break them into smaller stories, and have a more clear line between past and present.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
FINE-AL-LY!

Great job but please don't make us wait too long for the next update! Only thing is ... Ethan. It's a bit presumptuous of me but I think he's Gabe's (at least I hope he is). In the next chapter could you maybe also clear up how Dean knew what happened 6yrs ago? and also maybe clear up whether or not Dean has seen his only sister in the past 6yrs, because I don't recall reading how long it had been since the two had seen each other.

<p>Anyway, great job nonetheless. Looking forward for more.</p>

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Thank you

Wahoo Please add more soon!

AlitheAlitheover 14 years ago
omg SO good

This is definitely my kind of story line. Please PLEASE update soon.

woodmanonewoodmanoneover 14 years ago
One huge problem

with this tale is that it's not finished yet. Get to work. Seriously I am enjoying your story. I seldom read a story from a woman's POV but this one has me hooked. Great character development, fantastic plot, and for me a good flow. The flashbacks are a very nice technical aspect and make the story more interesting. I find little fault with your writing and if there are mistakes they are too minor to matter. Please hurry with the next chapter or chapters, I don't wait very well. Just ask my wife. Thanks for your hard work and keep it up.

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