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All Comments on 'Lia's Response to Wayward Behavior'

by MNGirl

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Safari4444Safari4444almost 12 years ago
Another great story

That was good. I love your descriptive write and can't wait to read the altered version.

rdoolittlerdoolittlealmost 12 years ago
More action

Some more activity would help in holding reader interest. I realize you were building suspense for the sub. Anticipation is good. Waiting for next submission.

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