by lance gt
Love your use of power and submission. Your characters sound almost real. Hope there are many more chapters to go.
not BDSM. If you are embarassed to put teh correct category how can you write it. Low score for trying to conn people into reading your chapter.
to anonymous usa, if you read the previous two chapters before, you would know this is a continuing story. don't judge a book by it's cover so quickly. there are 12 chapters in this story and it gets nastier still.
How can you write such stuff under the wrong category. Come on, it's Lesbian. That's spelled L-E-S-B-I-A-N.