All Comments on 'Life at Last Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
HOT!

Love your use of power and submission. Your characters sound almost real. Hope there are many more chapters to go.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
The term is Lesbian

not BDSM. If you are embarassed to put teh correct category how can you write it. Low score for trying to conn people into reading your chapter.

lance gtlance gtabout 18 years agoAuthor
read before you comment

to anonymous usa, if you read the previous two chapters before, you would know this is a continuing story. don't judge a book by it's cover so quickly. there are 12 chapters in this story and it gets nastier still.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Get Real!

How can you write such stuff under the wrong category. Come on, it's Lesbian. That's spelled L-E-S-B-I-A-N.

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