All Comments on 'Life: It Gets Better Ch. 02'

Me Likey!

Even though this is your first story I really like It. P.S. Everyone has to start somewhere...=) KEEP WRITING!!!!

Talk about a cliffhanger.. on man! Can't wait till ch. 3 =D

Nice story, good story line and a well developed plot. A very definite improvement over your first effort so keep going. You have talent but need to develop it further.

It;s a pleasant surprise that a female writer can depict male gay sex with so much understanding and sensitivity.

Incredible really.

I really like it. I like their chemistry. I only would have liked to have seen some conversation and have them eat...seemed like they've said only a few sentences to each other. So since Paul went through so much effort for a pretty great first date, I think it would have been good to use that to have us learn something/them learn something about each other.

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