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All Comments on 'Life of Greg'

by TGChris21

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

this story did not make sense

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Maybe

it could be a good start depending on what comes next. Potential to be a great plot line. You do need more dialog between people to make the story more interesting. Waiting to see what comes from chapter 2.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 9 years ago
Good so far..

Please continue , you are doing fine so far..

RebeccaCherieRebeccaCherieover 9 years ago
Well done.

Like it so far honey xxxxxx

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