All Comments on 'Life Turned Into Black'

I was enjoying the story and then saw all of the bad grammar and mis spellings and it turned me off.

the story is nice, but everything was so choppy. it wasn't smooth reading. there were many points where i was a bit confused. character descriptions would have been nice. before you killed Kaleigh off, it would have been nice to know more about her. that way her death would have mattered more to me and not have seemed like just an ending.