All Comments on 'Life Under the Sea Ch. 04'

Thank you so much for writing more of this story. I've been waiting and waiting...you didn't disappointed me. I hope you will continue with this story. It only gets better and better

This just gets better and better.... Keep up the GREAT work can't wait for more!!! This is the best I've read!!!

Thanks for indulging my mermaid obsession. Your writing is wonderful and I love the world you have woven. Keep up the great work.

BY FAR the best story ive ever read on this site! awaiting your next amazing entry :)

You are an amazing writer. And we are all holding our breath, waiting for part 5

A very very very story. It becomes better and better with each tale. I can hardly wait for part 5. Let us wait not too long for that part.

plz this is a relly good story i wana no what happens and do it ASAP!

i'm not even reading this to be horny anymore....

this story is really good but it stops at a cliff hanger!!!

Please please please continue!!!!

i absolutely love the story, i cant wait for more

What a place to stop! Good story.

Aww man why'd you stop. I was really getting into this story. When will you post more. I am waiting for the rest of the story. By the way, you are an excellent writer and I love this story.

Oh my you stopped a teeth grinding situation. I can't wait to read what happens next!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!

What a tease you stopping at a most crucial point please hurry and write more I'm dying to find out what happens

i would luv to know what happens next! please post the next chapter soon! i can't wait!!!

Just finished reading the story. It stopped at the ood part. When are you going to post the next story. Can't wait to read it. So far this is an outstanding read. I just love it.

when are you going to continue??

If I was Damien I would arrange for Jesse's parents to see her so that they will believe she's alive and a mermaid.