by jlynann
If I was Damien I would arrange for Jesse's parents to see her so that they will believe she's alive and a mermaid.
Just finished reading the story. It stopped at the ood part. When are you going to post the next story. Can't wait to read it. So far this is an outstanding read. I just love it.
i would luv to know what happens next! please post the next chapter soon! i can't wait!!!
What a tease you stopping at a most crucial point please hurry and write more I'm dying to find out what happens
Oh my you stopped a teeth grinding situation. I can't wait to read what happens next!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
Aww man why'd you stop. I was really getting into this story. When will you post more. I am waiting for the rest of the story. By the way, you are an excellent writer and I love this story.
i'm not even reading this to be horny anymore....
this story is really good but it stops at a cliff hanger!!!
Please please please continue!!!!
plz this is a relly good story i wana no what happens and do it ASAP!
A very very very story. It becomes better and better with each tale. I can hardly wait for part 5. Let us wait not too long for that part.
You are an amazing writer. And we are all holding our breath, waiting for part 5
BY FAR the best story ive ever read on this site! awaiting your next amazing entry :)
Thanks for indulging my mermaid obsession. Your writing is wonderful and I love the world you have woven. Keep up the great work.
This just gets better and better.... Keep up the GREAT work can't wait for more!!! This is the best I've read!!!
Thank you so much for writing more of this story. I've been waiting and waiting...you didn't disappointed me. I hope you will continue with this story. It only gets better and better