All Comments on 'Life Under the Sea Ch. 05'

Are you going to write any more to this story I find it really a great read and will her cousin come bk and turn himself into a merman

I was hesitant to post this chapter in general. I love reading comments to see if people actually are following this far. However, all I will write is an epilogue if the comments are positive enough. I have moved on to other merpeople-related stories and will, hopefully, post one in the coming month.

This story is amzing!!! Please write more!!!

I have read it all so far. Wonderful, but i am sitting with the question: Willher cousin return? Will he become a merman? Will his parents find out?

hey, i've read the whole story and it was amazing! so beautiful, :)

id say my least favourite parts (i still liked them) were the bits about the cousin as i was scared it may turn into some incest thing when i really just wanted to read about riley and her ;) !! but yeah i thought it was lovely, i love how sensitive he is, i just wish you'd write more, with jesse and riley being together :) xx

I love this story. This is my 5th time reading this story and I am hopeing that you make a new story about Jesse and Riley. But I don't like the ending

I absolutely love this story. Can you either continue it or write an epilogue? I want to know more about Jesse & Riley. Also if there could be a sequel with Damien's story, that'll be great.

Very good story. I loved it. Currently i am wondering if there shall ever be an epilogue or not. Also, shall there ever be a side story like Damien's story, the meeting with her parents, ...

Continu this story please. I am regularly looking for updates.

I absolutely loved this story. Please write more.

Will her cousin come back, and make the decision to join her in a life underwater?

Will her parents find out?

How will she tell the little sister?

How far will their relationship go?

I hope you finish this story! Its absolutely amazing! 5/5 10/10 A+ 100%!

with this story! It makes me WANT to believe in mermaids and everlasting love. Thank you for writing this, it was a treasure-find indeed. Reading this story after watching The Shape of Water, beautiful combo and so sexy and romantic. Well done! 200%!!

Adore this series!