by CoCoNiy101
'shuttering'- SHUDDERING, one among many errors. Do you know what a shutter is?
About errors. I'm just glad you and the Walton's are back. Loved it.
Glad to see them back.
I love this surprise.
Thanks!
Nat and Bob is back with the baby. I loved the Unexpected Interest, so having them back is like an early Christmas gift. THANK YOU!!! I can't wait for more :D
There were definitely a few errors, and while errors sometimes bother me (a lot), the few in this story did not take away from it for me.
An editor may help but I still LOVE them and their attraction to and love for each other.
Yeah I didn't send this to my editor because I didn't think it would post this long. So I underestimated the amount of mistakes that I could've made haha. I will send the next chapter to my editor though.
Thanks
I really love this couple. Glad for the update and the errors didn't bother me. I was just so happy you decided to write more about them!! :)
Glad you decided to continue this couple story. But I have to say I like all of your stories.
This has to be one of my FAVORITE stories on this site! I didn't even know that you started writing a part 2 to the story! Now I'm anticipating a new series!! Please continue with Natasha and Bobby's story. I just love them!!!!
And write more stories about this couple. I'm in love with them. Lol