All Comments on 'Life with: Natasha and Bobby Ep. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

'shuttering'- SHUDDERING, one among many errors. Do you know what a shutter is?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I don't care....

About errors. I'm just glad you and the Walton's are back. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I missed Tash &Bobby

Hey Anonymous shut the hell up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I Must Reread Unexpected Interest....again!!!

Glad to see them back.

I love this surprise.

Thanks!

cuteButSexy218cuteButSexy218over 10 years ago
Yes!! *Happy Dance*

Nat and Bob is back with the baby. I loved the Unexpected Interest, so having them back is like an early Christmas gift. THANK YOU!!! I can't wait for more :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love them

There were definitely a few errors, and while errors sometimes bother me (a lot), the few in this story did not take away from it for me.

An editor may help but I still LOVE them and their attraction to and love for each other.

CoCoNiy101CoCoNiy101over 10 years agoAuthor
Editing

Yeah I didn't send this to my editor because I didn't think it would post this long. So I underestimated the amount of mistakes that I could've made haha. I will send the next chapter to my editor though.

Thanks

Michmommy2Michmommy2over 10 years ago
Love these two

I really love this couple. Glad for the update and the errors didn't bother me. I was just so happy you decided to write more about them!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Glad you decided to continue this couple story. But I have to say I like all of your stories.

london101london101over 10 years ago
loved it!

Can't wait for more! Great job! Luv your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue to write!!!!

This has to be one of my FAVORITE stories on this site! I didn't even know that you started writing a part 2 to the story! Now I'm anticipating a new series!! Please continue with Natasha and Bobby's story. I just love them!!!!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieabout 10 years ago
me likey

Please continue with the goodness!

kuriouskalekuriouskaleabout 10 years ago
Lovin' it

Girl, I am loving these updates...please keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
please come back

And write more stories about this couple. I'm in love with them. Lol

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