All Comments on 'Lights, Camera, Action Part 01'

by Milliemoon

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DeeSobekDeeSobekalmost 17 years ago
Beautifully written

The story was gripping, I desperately want to know how it ends. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Feminine perspective and reaction

I knew the author was a woman because this last scene was pure feminine drama. Oh the angst, fueling a conflict that could be resolved one way or another if they just sat down and talked to each other instead of Yan giving a speech, then walking away without giving a chance to his lover to open his mouth and offer an explanation. I may be gay, but that's not how men react. They might even come to blows, but they would have talked and resolved the issue. Hell, maybe he's a porn star because he's paying his way through college.

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