All Comments on 'Lights, Camera, Action Part 02'

I thought both were well written the emotions were great and the story feels complete.

Loved the emotional connection that these two have. I also like the fact that their relationship survived the trial and that they are both willing to make changes to make it work. Absolutely wonderful!

What a spinner... Story line reached out and draws you in, flooding with emotions and passion. Outstand work.

Totally awesome! I would love to read another story about these two. They are so hot totally together and so sexy! May we have more please!

Very, very impressive - and that goes for both chapters, but this one is really hot, because of the role reversal at the end.

fantastic story. love the way you developed the characters and their relationship. hope you havent stopped writing. 5 starss