All Comments on 'Lincoln Park Mommy Ch. 03'

But that paragraph at the end is a monster. Knit picking I know, but its hard to read such a long paragraph.

Having said that, I still gave you a 5.

Screwed out of dinner...but who would complain?

can only be described as a true slutress. There are but a few the planet is blessed with, but she is one. Her total worth as a human is a dump for body fluids. Somewhere along in the story, I'd like to see a guy shit and piss on her and in her.

I have asked that it be corrected. It was a formatting error, and in the original txt file it was actually seven separate paragraphs. Sorry. The author.

"MAX DID NOT REALIZE KELLY RARELY GAVE REPEAT PERFORMANCES". WHAT'S DAN CHOPPED LIVER....THE ONLY REDEEMING FACTOR WOULD BE IF EVELYN GREW UP TO BE A NUN...TO EVEN OUT HER MOM'S LACK OF SELF ESTEEM...LIKE SHE DOESN'T KNOW...THE PETER COUNTER FIZZLED ON THIS ONE...

must have missed the word "rarely." i'm writing in all lower case to counter your all upper case.

You fucking whiner. What's with all the caps? Are you so fucking arrogant that you think we can't read unless you scream at us. You piece of crap. Thanks for the lesson in morality. Now, I don't have to go to church this weekend. In fact, I never have to go to church again. All I have to do is listen to your lessons, and I'll be a good boy from here and evermore. Shitball. Lick yourself.

The same-old, same-old. Written for low IQ defective males

Old school LW readers got testy if someone dared to disparage a cheating whore.