All Comments on 'Linzer Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

It didn't seem that it was the end, hope that there's more to come.

BBeinhartBBeinhartover 3 years ago
Intriguing

This story has legs.....and a long way to go. More chapters, please!

bluealseidesbluealseidesover 3 years ago

Definitely seems like there is a lot more mileage you could get out of this story. Interesting premise and an unusual take on the "opposites attract" trope.

Baldy74Baldy74over 3 years ago

Definitely needs a conclusion. Either somehow they get together or he finds the woman that will give him the family and home he obviously wants and needs.

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