All Comments on 'Li's Story Ch. 01'

by TheArcticFox

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Many elements too harsh for my personal tastes, but a well written story. With her master gone, I fear for her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Wow. That was extremely well written. I really love BDSM, and the Master/Slave concept, but that was a bit much. However this was an amazing story.

thor_pfthor_pfalmost 11 years ago
I agree, Wow!

Well-written and captivating, and then the shock ending. How will she recover? Can't wait to find out. I'm subscribing to the author right away!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Shock ending...

Will the story continue due to His death? It is called Ch. 01 after all, meaning there will be more.

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