All Comments on 'Lisa and the Vampires'

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mBrowmBrowover 15 years ago
Fine start

Good job, good writing. Would you extend this story, please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice for your first story

Keep on in this vain and I think your stories should do well. Well written and a different angle to the usual vampire tale. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Kindred Sex...

Very nice.

Very nice, indeed. It's good to read a well written story about the Kindred after so long a time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Scary kinky

This was very good. I enjoyed the realism of the conflict Lisa had with the Nosferatu but not being able to deny the feeling he gave her. I with there was a chp 2. I would love to see how Karina used the new 'addiction' to vamp sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story!

You should definitely write more like it, you have a great talent.

dkm25433dkm25433over 12 years ago
strange

i think it would have been better if she didn't fuck a deformed vampire. that guy was weird. everything before that was hot though.

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