All Comments on 'Lisa Makes a New Friend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good premise

Promising start, but needs editing to clean it up and make it easier to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Poor bobby. You were just pathetic. Now you are even worse off

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fantastic Story

Looking forward to more.

Shade333Shade333over 9 years ago
Hoping for more

This story was great and im hoping to see more.

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