All Comments on 'Little Dove'

A very warm sweet love story with all of the pecking of an old fairy tale.

Beautifully thought out and written with a touch of modern day technologies interwoven into the work. Thanks for the good read.

I was overall waiting for something sexy to happen, but also keeping in mind that this was very unusual story for you.

I notice you have the same Initial kidnapping of non-consent reluctance theme going on in most of the stories, but do you think you could add another chapter? It just seemed to end abruptly as they were beginning a new chapter of life.

Good story.

It looked like it was going to be somewhat violent, but it was sweet and nice, a true story in the style of My Fair Lady

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Why use quotes if you suck so badly with them? YOU DON'T START A NEW PARAGRAPH WHEN THE SAME PERSON IS TALKING. Pls that was painful to read.

It was a Great Love Story and as a somewhat hopeless romantic Dom who is also a tradesman, I wished that i too could find my "little dove". Although i would do more than just physically train her i would sexually train her to my liking as well. Too many women nowadays seem to think being on their own is best for them and sadly i recently saw how my first Love had been destroyed by it as her life is filled with tragedies and turmoil's and she turned into the thing she hated the most a Narcissist, although a covert one as she is the "Constant victim" and blames all of the things in her life on someone else. And while I have gone onto to be successful in developing a Great Plumbing business and supplementing it by not just renovating houses for others but also for myself and acquiring many rentals. So, when I went to see her, she was not aware of my sucess, and I was not ready to share it but yet wanted to see the type of person she was and if she still had some of those qualities I loved in the past. But instead, i found she was on 400mg a day of SSRI anti-depressants, major other meds totally over a dozen pills a day. And while she had lost weight and looked similar, she was more like Candy in this story. I however was not like John but more along the lines of David as I reside in a lakefront house and very few neighbors. I visited her and looked after he for several months and got tired of hearing things like; "You deserve someone better than me", and "when will you leave me like all the others" as the self-deprecating and put downs while being passive-aggressive weren't working well one as my ex-wife of 25 years was a Master of those and only got me to further ignore and not listen to her games. Instead, I became more assertive and set down rules and guides for which she had to follow. She would try to play games, withhold sex and spend money but I would counter it by holding out and saying when she was ready to stop playing, she would be rewarded. She got to the point she liked the rewards but tried to skirt around the rules and would get caught and at times enjoyed being paddled and spanked so much so she asked for it as foreplay. And she would Love to be blindfolded tied and eaten and have her orgasms controlled by me as the intensity and frequency increased as it made me thrilled to see her thrash about wildly begging to cum again and again. And when she would be almost insane begging me to fuck her she was willing to agree to ANYTHING and that embarrassed her for being so submissive and would have her blushing if i were to remind her. I knew she enjoyed submitting and liked the new adventures and while we did some pretty wild things, we Always did them together and shared 100% as I told her if he were to LIE and get emotionally involved then he would have crossed the line. Her family would have been shocked to know I had allowed her to be with other women and to submit to them also, or that she liked to be blindfolded and fucked by several unknown men never knowing their identity as I was the one in control and protecting her and was also a participant, but it was too easy for her to figure out when it was me. She came to enjoy the different toys and games and was always soaking wet as it became a game to ty and get me to do her when she wanted as the power of sex was on my choice, but her passive aggressive games were her way of trying to get me to want to play such that she would go to elaborate ways. But she Broke my trust and thought that not telling me one time was ok when out with her girlfriends. But one of her girlfriends betrayed her in hopes i would give her he chance; without realizing her betrayal was the very reason she would not get the chance. So ironically my standing by my Values and lines in the sand ended up costing me my marriage as I thought I had my little dove but didn't. Many others would be like Maria as I actually had 5 women who tried to set me up with "Eligible women" that they swore would be good for me. Instead, I had several who were willing slaves and eager to be submissive especially once one would tell another of my "Special skills" of being able to eat out a lady for hours and making them cum at will giving allot of them the MOST Orgasms they had experienced let alone in a night. Others would volunteer and t got distracting that woman would try and trick me by calling for me to do work for them only to try and seduce me especially as exchange for payment. And then the dirty phone calls started, and I had to up and block them. One lady said she became my slave when she heard my deep voice and it made her wet, as she was a widow and had never had a man make her instantly wet in just hearing me talk (and it wasn't even dirty) So I learned techniques used by the FBO and CIA and even perfected it so i could inflect and use my voice to get responses I wanted. Amusingly business customers became more women and some I dated were so Jealous if they overheard one calling me. I stepped back a little and became more selectiv when i started studying :Chinese Face Reading" so I could select the "Right Type" I am seeking as amazingly I ow had women half my age chasing after me. But like David allot don't strike my heart as sex is good but to have that connection is even More powerful as I too search for my :Little Dove". Interestingly I had a young girl (20 something so you don't think she was underage) ask me to abduct and take her as my slave and while i hadn't set a definitive amount of time as too how long i would keep her and train her i found after a little over a week and i would either have to commit to keeping her forever or as i did was bind her and return her much to her disappointment as she tried stalking me begging me to take her back and promising me the moon. But I knew while she may have liked it she was Not my "little dove"/Soulmate just as the previous college girlfriend I though might be was no longer. I hope that I find her and who knows maybe she might even see this and write me as so many others who i correspond with from all over the world since the pandemic started. You see I like the stories so much it relates to my own history and life and while i have led an extremely colorful life it wasn't until recently i started to write down them not as Literotica stories but as actual experiences and still have not decided whether to publish it or not as i wouldn't want my kids or relatives to see some of the things i have done or become. But yeti think some would not be as surprised. I hope I can continue and eventually find my little dove. But in the meantime, i am teaching a man on how to make his wife squirt as she had convinced me that he needed to learn after I showed her how she was able to when her good friend had in a drink induced night out revealed to her how I had made her cum more times in one night then she had in the previous decade. So now she ironically almost interviews suitors and makes it a point to Only go home with men who can eat her pussy with a vigor and enthusiasm she felt with me. So if there are any Sexy slender (or willing to be trained and aren't objectionable to exercise as I will join you in the gym or you can find me there 3x a week anyway) and You Ladies think you would be a Good Laura for a Dom then write me in the Midwest just east of Chicago as I hope to hear from you.