All Comments on 'Little Miss Trouble Ch. 01'

you better not make any more storys you suck

Don't let the previous feedback faze you. You write well, and your main characters are well drawn and believable. I am enjoying the passion and sexual tension between Tina and Uncle Rob. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

guess she lives at the bar or in her car.

Not worth voting for.

Excellent beginning and I loved where you took this in part 2. Don't listen to the negative comments. You have talent and should keep writing.

Uncle Rob should have fucked her silly! Everything else fine!

Well-written, with interesting characters and a delicious storyline. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.