All Comments on 'Living Next Door'

[17.09.23]

Mucho Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!

Nice little unrequited love Romance. Well done! Great read.

Love the story, don’t think I could have done it though..would hurt too much to be around

The story was good but like some others have said it needed a few more lines or an epilogue.

no wonder he got friend zoned. He thinks and behaves like a girl.

You have written a lovelly romance here.

Loving her but remaining a "friend" and giving help and advice when needed, poor chap but you did find a happy ending for him.

I think the ending was a bit quick, it deserved a few more lines.

This was also the first story I found on this site without any erotic, I was surprised.

I enjoyed reading it this time as much as I did the first time.

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A very nice story and fairly realistic and believable.

That's a good story...

I liked it too and you definitely have a fine talent. Thanks for your stories. Keep writing!

That was fantastic! Yes, i did think it was very good. You have quite a talent. You could think of it as predictable, yes. But it was very much worth the time reading.

Very simple and direct. Keep up the good work.

A very pleasant read.

Thank you!

M1

I loved this story! It was short, sweet and to the point. Very well done!!!!!

This to me was a great story.When there is a good submission someone always complains of spelling errors or punctuation. Not this time though, just a great story line.Well Done Storm.

but so what, a very good loving story!!!