All Comments on 'Living the Dream'

I enjoyed this story even if it is on the short side. You should write more stories like this one but make them longer.

Not realistic or even remotely interesting.

Very little happening in too short a time. The story needs expanding with more happening

Basic idea is ok but it's extremely rushed and Rachel is far too comfortable with the reality of experimenting with another girl.

No hesitation, no confusion and no seduction.

It would be much hotter if Safia had to really work for it or trick Rachel into putting out for her.

This is a nice quickie. Dialogue is good enough (I love good dialogue), and the scene seems realistic enough. Hope Safi doesn't leave her hanging too long, and I hope you don't leave us hanging too long either. Please write more.

Youu Did A Good Job But It Was Rushed Youu Went From Stepping In The Door And Rachel Getting Caught To Them Messing Around Make It Realistic . But I Sincerely Loved Your Story And If Anything Continue It .