All Comments on 'Lonely Stretch of Highway'

Not a bad story, in concept, but a few flaws leap out. First, it probably needed to be a good bit longer; there wasn't much "romance" involved. Second, a little more space would have made the explanation about the car trouble seem more plausible. Third, there was not much about WHY she was so upset in the first place. And all that without begging the question of what happened next. So overall, "cute and warm" but leaving too many unresolved issues. Sorry.

-- KK in Texas