All Comments on 'Long, Hard Day'

A really exciting fantasy that's close enough to reality to be fun, but not overboard on the details or prose either. I'll keep an eye out to see if you write again.

Good story, more realistic than most, and just the right length. Spelling and punctuation better than a lot of submissions.

Good story, but it's cheery, not cherry. Cherry is a fruit.

Even in a fictional story this was abuse, plain and simple. Time to pack your things and get an attorney, not go down and fix dinner for the abusive prick.