All Comments on 'Long-Lost Brother of Mine'

by KarennaC

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lisasmurflisasmurfabout 15 years ago
will done

sure like the it, would of like a little more in detail

of the great sex, I like when you writers say well hung or just the 6 or 7 inches I hate when guy are 9" pr more was one I started to read the mAN WAS TO BEEN 14 INCHES

thats when i stopped, Hope to see more to these one,

Sis got get her lips around the peace of meat!

Maybe even dear OLD mom can get some work out too

Please write more!

KarennaCKarennaCabout 15 years agoAuthor
In answer to a comment

I received a comment via e-mail, and since it was anonymous, I have to answer here, I guess, and hope that person sees it. To respond to his/her question, I don't "switch back and forth randomly" between "cum" and "come." "Cum" is a noun. It's the white gooey stuff that comes out of a man's cock. "Come" is a verb, in this context being a synonym for orgasm. That is why I use both words. By the way, I *am* a professional writer. That's how I learned that protocol.

wiz666wiz666about 15 years ago
Don't worry about it, KG!

I liked it, and I too know the difference between 'cum' and' come'. Some people just like to find things to be picky about because they feel inadequate in their own lives! Keep up the good work, and don't stop writing!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Great

I normally don't like incest stories but I liked this one because of the storyline. The sex was also very hot and believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More please.

Loved reading this story. Please continue telling us what happens next to them.

gsacruzataurgsacruzataurover 12 years ago
GSA Genetic Sexual Attraction Story

This is a perfect case of Genetic Sexual Attraction!

http://www.geneticsexualattraction.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1997

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Predictable. Boring

As the title says; predictable and boring. Fucking boring.

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8about 7 years ago
Good story so far

Good start to the story. Now for the mum, then keep it all in the family. Hope you continue on with this story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

couple4fun4080couple4fun4080almost 6 years ago
not short and sweet

it was fricken shot and HOT!!!!

DAWG8265DAWG8265about 2 years ago

Next chapter, please!

bshell47bshell47about 2 years ago

Ok story, but I think a little too soon.

4 stars

Will you follow up with more?

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