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by Jenna Grey

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
An intelligent tale

I enjoy 'flawed' characters and would love to see how these two control freaks establish their relationship. The power struggle between the two should be interesting to see if you are planning on a sequel.

MysteryMaidenMysteryMaidenabout 19 years ago
Great detail

Great writing, great detail. Very erotic - I really liked it. Would have liked to see a little more of a detailed ending... but otherwise, perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Thank You.

I have spent too much time looking for a real story and pretty well had given up, so thank you for producing a romantic AND erotic story. I see that the date on this story is a while ago, here's to finding more and more of them.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 3 years ago

I would love to see where this is going.

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