All Comments on 'Longing'

Mmm, this was temptingly sensuous! I had a thought when it comes to vampiric transformations...do you think it's the transformation of character that makes it so appealing? For bookish Evelyn this seems the case, and many others in vampire tales as well. I wonder, do you think this type of transformation could make a normally outgoing, even obnoxious person, sweet and shy? Just pondering. Sorry! :)

~Luna

A sweet little romance with a sexy vampire kick!

Love the vampire stories and this was great. Hope there is another part to this.

That last line is perfection! Great vampire story!

"Can we fly?"

"More like... fall and bounce really well."

That made me lol. :D Amyway, I liked your story, especially that you went away from the usual vampire cliche. You know, the tortured, brooding vampire who is angsting all the time and lonesomely wanders the earth searching for his soulmate... thank you for not doing that.