by stephanie_webster
As always, I enjoy reading the products of your wonderfully dirty little mind. I liked the story, and I am looking forward to seeing where you take it. One suggestion though: try to be more thorough with your editing and spellcheck. There are several errors that I find distracting, which I think prevent otherwise erotic work like this from scoring as highly as they should. Happy
Wow, can not wait for the next chapter of this story