by trianglove
An amazing first three chapters. The depth that you have given to each of the characters truly shows your writing talents. So far an incredible story with each chapter getting better and better. Can't wait for chapeter 4.
Thanks for keeping me at full attention from the first word of chapter one through the last word of chapter three.
Mikeyss73@yahoo.com
very nice story, good characters. i like the little self-irony of the ladies.
Now I'm all hot, lol. Looking forward to more steamy scenes in the future.