All Comments on 'Lord Daygar - Kingslayer'

It's well written, though a little bit Game of Thrones-y. Also, the clit is a small nub above the opening of the vagina, it's not the part that splits. Still, I enjoyed it. Best wishes on the rest.

I think he misspelled 'slit.'

Glad you studied the story well. Must have had clit on the brain, probably still have! All comments are useful. Part 2 is due anytime now and 3 is also ready to go. Hope I have raised my game this time and look forward to hearing from you. Lord D

That was both sexy and scary. Looking forward to going onto part 2. Emily (UK)

This is one of the first stories I've read here and I'm riveted. Hardly dare go to chapter 2!

I never imagined myself doing this but here I am. I want to know if I can use Lord Daygar in one of my own stories that I happen to be working on. Not as a lead role but indeed an important one. I would mention where I got him and hopefully direct more people to you but I will not put it in without your okay.

It is impossible to "split her clit" I'm presuming you mean her vagina ....I suggest you look up what and where a clitoris is lol Otherwise a great story so far.