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All Comments on 'Losing Mona'

by bassbelly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another

Another fine little story ,you must have a very fertile mind .Well Done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
one little detail

This is the beginning of what portends to be a very nice story, but I do have one small quibble. (Apparently, you don't do many weddings.) The so-called "wedding march" is usually exit music, not the bride's entrance music (processional).

-- KK in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Too bad you couldn't get past the age thing

A very nice love story. Except I don't understand why he would risk losing her simply due to an age gap. It's obvious they were sexually compatible. Oh well.

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