by LiveCat
Love, in its truest form. The emotions that you so skilfully depicted, could be felt by your readers, who in turn wanted so much for Kate and Chris to be in love with each other, forever. Yes, a happy ending I know, but in our present 'system of things', we need your Stories, to nurture that sense of 'Hope' in our own lives.
Thank you, and keep on sharing your written skills with us.
I love your stories. They show real emotion and depict some of the struggles us girls go through with honesty. They also turn me on! Keep up the good work xx
This one brought tears to my eyes. Damn! Hate it when that happens! Great story. :) ~ L
I first read this story when it was first posted. Just came back to it & loved it just as much! Sometimes it's good to remember that people are complex & sometimes we do the wrong things for the right reasons.
Another great story Livecat, keep em coming.
xx
Wow....fact or fiction, doesn't really matter it made me feel good inside. Brought tears of sadness then joy, just as all good stories should.
Brilliant,loved it,wish I could express myself better,but DAMN GOOD
I was worried from the title that this wouldn't end well.
I'm a happy ending kinda guy and was SO happy that everything worked out.
I'm working through your stories chronologically, and you're two for two 5-stars.
I had the same feeling as sbrooks, was expecting a sad ending, was pleasantly surprised.
When Chris needed a couple of hours, I thought it was because she was going to leave a rose on her first lovers grave, nice touch with the tattoo.
I rarely give 5 starts for a short story. Am more into long ones where characters and the story itself takes time to develop... this one though its just for 2 page I felt the love... HOPE... Forgiveness!!! This one just shows the story doesn't need to be long to feel what was being said.
I agree... thought this will have a sad ending... fought hard to skip and read the ending 1st... am glad I didn't and my heart was caught in a big surprise that it was a very Happy one and that AWWW feeling was all over. Really like this one!
Short yet full of LOVE... HOPE... FORGIVENESS... ACCEPTANCE!!!
Yes speechless tooo ..... This is extraordinary ...... My heart my soul is pounding , tears running down , im stunned ....... What a enchanting beautiful love story and thank you for this happy end ...... Wonderful
Just found you, these are such good stories and there is a new one I think, thanks so much. The watcher is just my favorite but I've only read 3 so far.
Death is the ultimate heartbreak. How does one get over that? Even if you weren't in love.
Guilt is a powerful trip.
Short, but very well written. Or ... maybe ... just the right length.