All Comments on 'Lost and Found'

The characters are inadequately developed, to put it mildly.

Much of the text makes no sense - completely unrealistic

This would make a good love story if redone. Our hero is a man of integrity who cooks-which is rarefy in these stories. This story is more than just sex and I agree with those who say it's not developed-it has great potential to be more than a sex story . How does he find out her talents? show us her potential as a business woman..

I was disappointed with the ending. It could have been much stronger and forceful. Fast forward to her opening her own store, for instance..

The new watercress at Abby's -shows the guy as just another cheap prick. The author should save that for another story..